Gunboat Diplomat attempts Editing Practice #001!

[Gunboat Diplomat]

[br]Posted on: July 05, 2006, 11:49:43 PM_________________________________________________Okay, here's the same image with all my typesetting mistakes, corrected...

 

[NeoShweaty]

doesnt look to shabby to me except for the fact that you removed the sfx without replacing them with anything. You either leave them in or replace them with the english, lol. It was probably just an oversight