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It's been a couple of days since I joined this forum, and in that time, I've been browsing the Amateur Manga forum and looking at what people usually wrote about here. One trend I spotted was that most of the story ideas that people had for manga revolved around fantasy themes and action themes. Not that I had a problem with that, but I noticed a general lack of ideas pitching for lighter content such as Romantic Comedies or Sports/ Activity related School-Life manga, something bordering on Bakuman or Ouran HSHC.
I had an idea for a manga that sparked off an rp I did over on DeviantArt, but I wanted some critiquing and help in polishing it up.
It goes like this:
Yukina Kamiya starts off her first year of high school looking to focus on her studies, like any other normal student. She hides the fact that she is a dedicated and talented violinist by hiding her instrument out in the back of the school, where she goes to play after school hours. However, one day, a guy follows her and overhears her playing and then enlists her as the new violinist and concertmistress of the Orchestra Club.
Originally opposed due to an incident in grade school when she was harassed by older kids for being good, she is dragged into joining temporarily and finds that the Orchestra at her school is a new age orchestra, that practices with newer, modern, pop music but performs old age classical music.
While there, she meets a host of characters with differing talent and personalities, and ends up as the target of affection of four boys.
This story is a romantic comedy/ harem with a focus on music.
I had an idea for a manga that sparked off an rp I did over on DeviantArt, but I wanted some critiquing and help in polishing it up.
It goes like this:
Yukina Kamiya starts off her first year of high school looking to focus on her studies, like any other normal student. She hides the fact that she is a dedicated and talented violinist by hiding her instrument out in the back of the school, where she goes to play after school hours. However, one day, a guy follows her and overhears her playing and then enlists her as the new violinist and concertmistress of the Orchestra Club.
Originally opposed due to an incident in grade school when she was harassed by older kids for being good, she is dragged into joining temporarily and finds that the Orchestra at her school is a new age orchestra, that practices with newer, modern, pop music but performs old age classical music.
While there, she meets a host of characters with differing talent and personalities, and ends up as the target of affection of four boys.
This story is a romantic comedy/ harem with a focus on music.